five little pieces

[Dastrix Slogan]

but today
five little pieces
fit

you don't know
sixty five thousand
five hundred and thirty five
colours
until you have to sift
through them all

but today
five little pieces
of the million piece puzzle
fit

yet it is getting late
and
by now
i should have had so much more to show
so much more
finished

but today
five little pieces
of the million piece puzzle
fit
hardly complete
so much better
than never begun

if only i had the cover
the grand final picture
so i may copy, compare....
then again if i could see it
in it's entirety
would i ever
start at all?

but today
five little pieces
of the million piece puzzle
fit
hardly complete
so much better
than never begun
and the five that sit locked
just look like they might
form the image
of the corner
of a smile
upon my face

 

[katmeow]

but today
five little pieces
of the million piece puzzle
fit
hardly complete
so much better
than never begun
and the five that sit locked
just look like they might
form the image
of the corner
of a smile
upon my face

This is great... nice form, I love the build up.

Sweet piece of work!!

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

^^Thank you - I have been suffering from some serious writers block lately - good to be back!

 

[up all night]

I like how this is composed. Three cheers for the abolishment of writers block!

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

^This is wonderful. :D
Put a big smile on my face.

 

[titania]

Dastrix, that's really cool! I really loved that!! :D

xxx

 

[RareForm]

but today
five little pieces
of the million piece puzzle
fit

absolutely wonderful...exceptional writing Datrix......