First Words and Frustration

[Billy Wonka]

This is my first post in Words and the first poem (however after revising it it seems to have become prose-like) I have ever written voluntarily...
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What should I do? I lie motionless while my emotions and thoughts war on.
I was manipulated, influenced by friends.
Do I now see the truth, or only their lies?
Am I confused? Am I coherent? I am torn.
I sit unmoving whilst my two halves sprint down opposing paths.
Oh, Look how vainly they both struggle to lose each other!
Alas, their separation is futile, for they are intimately chained.
If I act now, the bond will be severed.
Do I wish for a stronger to take its place?
But, if broken, it may never form anew.
I do not want to lose the bond. So, I will remain within my tranquil turmoil.
-BillyWonka
[This message has been edited by Billy Wonka (edited 01 October 2001).]

 

[Mellabopper]

good stuff

and i'm glad you took the opportunity to post in here
Mella
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rock on.
"if you want it, you can have it, but you gotta learn to reach out there and grab it." - Weezer

 

[marbica]

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"curiouser and curiouser..." -alice

 

[Bi KaNd*E* RaVeR]

{{{BW}}}

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~*Jen
*As bad as I am, I'm proud of the fact, that I'm worse then I seem.*