First post of my stuff..

[Sexy.Sadie]

Hey poetry/story vets. I'ma newbie. .not to BL, but to the word part. . .so. .be gentle? lol..

None of these really have titles..


Childlike tendencies
Liars, thieves
Deception is dependency
I know you’ll never grieve

No conscience ever detected
I’ll never be respected
Any admiration will soon be deflected
All the feeling is gone

Take the life you want
Choose who you wish to flaunt
I’m done, I quit, fire me please
I don’t care to be owned, yet treated diseased.

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Immense pleasure
Intolerable pain
Look at the future
See the disdain

Never get to see you
You’re only in my thoughts
My mind wishes to know you
My urges must be fought

I need to know the way you smell
That certain feel of heat
Looking at me you could tell
My body longs with need

Reaching out to touch your face
To be left with empty space

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Two very good pieces there, I like the burning sensuality thats dying to come through in the second, very well expressed. Welcome to words, look forward to reading more of your work!

 

[Sexy.Sadie]

thank ya. .

 

[RareForm]

like i said, i knew you could write. the second one.. i think i've felt something somewhat similar...

 

[Sexy.Sadie]

oh really? hmmm..thank you.

 

[EvoldicA]

Good job, and welcome.

 

[cherub]

well about time you entered our world welcome!

the writting was well done.... interesting to see what comes next !