Fever prayers

[Frosty da snowman]

My lord forgive us your forgotten children
Your wasted ones
Your downtrodden

Lord forgive us for not reaching your expectations
For failing
For stopping
For only taking one bite

We march to you lord
In your footsteps
Trailing in your wake

Forgive us for walking lord
For driving dead machines
For flying in metal shells
For not gracing the winds with our own winged flight

We walk to dark places lord
So that we might be burned
So we can be forced away
So we can learn as you taught us

Forgive us lord
As we crucify new martyrs
As we write our history
As we pen us anew with the blood of the great

Forgive lord
For not trying
For being mediocre
For being the obscene

forgive us lord for being your mirror
for being your doubts

forgive us lord for being you

 

[oceandreams]

wow....

 

[PurrrinInOk]

double wow....I will come back to this and comment, I need some time to reflect

 

[cherub]

amazing,,,,, I love to see the written raw truth,,,, believe i think i know many who believe as you do,.,,,, i will have to print them and show some of them...

( if that is cool with you?)

definately great work !

 

[Frosty da snowman]

( if that is cool with you?)

definately great work !

It's cool with me

 

[RareForm]

subtle throughout but goddang if it doesn't have a powerful feel to it. and the ending was quite a clencher. i loved this to death. awesome stuff man!

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

absolutely brilliant!!!

 

[Chalice]

Telling

That was an interesting and unabashed writing. I found the context to be telling of todays tribulations dealing with life and the longing perception of god. I think this work was very well done.