Feels Like Home

[femmme fatal]

this is a poem by my good friend, but i love it so much, i'm gonna post it for you all to read.
Feels Like Home
I'll paint my room incarnadine
For splitting flesh is home, you see
To show the tone of open wounds
Four walls to never close on me
I'll paint my room cerulean
To match my love for the open sea
And wish to sink but never drown
Four walls to so enrapture me
I'll paint my room viridian
So i could sleep inside a tree
And slowly creep amoungst the brush
Four walls to ever comfort me
I'll paint my room as black as ink
A bit grotesque, i do agree
No one would dare to look inside
Four walls to choke and smother me
-dane mcburnie
for some reason, i just really like this poem... and he's a fabulous writer as well
aj the femme
[ 18 June 2002: Message edited by: femmme fatal ]

 

[Angelight]

wow

 

[femmme fatal]

something about the line "And wish to sink but never drown".... i dunno.. but it just... mmmmm
hehe
aj the femme

 

[harraser]

and you havent got him posting in here because...?
This is really good, I love the images it brought to my head

 

[Dagny]

Duality. It's everywhere, is it not? Perhaps most glaringly in the place we expect to find comfort.
I love it sweetie, tell your friend that he has new fans.

 

[femmme fatal]

good question... i should tell him to post some more of his stuff here....
aj the femme

 

[E-girl]

wow this was really beautiful!
here's something else i thought might be of interest to you and your friend. its a song with the same title, and one of my favorites:
Feels Like Home
Performed by Chantal Kreviazuk
Written by Randy Newman

Something in your eyes makes me want
to lose myself
Makes me want to lose myself
In your arms
There's something in your voice makes my
heart beat fast
Hope this feeling lasts
The rest of my life
If you knew how lonely my life has been
And how long I've felt so low
If you knew how I wanted someone to
come along
And change my life the way you've done
Feels like home to me (2x)
Feels like I'm all the way back where
I come from
Feels like home to me (2x)
Feels like I'm all the way back where I belong
A window breaks down a long dark street
And a siren wails in the night
But I'm alright cause I have you here with me
And I can almost see through the darkthere's light
If you knew how much this moment
means to me
And how long I've waited for your touch
If you knew how happy you are making me
I've never thought I'd love anyone so much
Feels like home to me (2x)
Feels like I'm all the wayback where I come from
Feels like home to me (2x)
Feels like I'm all the way back
where I belong
Feels like I'm all the way back
where I belong