Feelgood

[nephil]

Today
I wake
crusted eyes
stale breath
hoping to see a white blanket
gently caressing
the outer shell
of all things natural
knowing
what bliss will come
if my hopes come true
relaxed
in the physical
focused
in the mental
gliding as if on air
or better yet
a magic carpet
I am the wind
Where once there lived fear
now lives respect
I know she has control
and i submit
giving in to recieve
the ultimate gift
of flawless movement
i am one with the mountain

 

[Housekid5]

oooooooooohhhh nice i wanna be there now

 

[DJLA]

ooooh, me tooo.... that is wonderful!!!

 

[liquidocean]

sounds like a flatirons moment

 

[katmeow]

I liked this... flows really well. I felt a sense of calm from reading it