~feel me~

[neverwas]

seduction,
temptation,
moving towards me,
as you make me tingle down my spine.

crawl across the floor
till you reach what you want
drink it all up
and come on back over here.

can you hear me?
im right here underneath you.
can you feel me?
im right here inside of you.

in and out
up and down.
can you feel me yet?

is that what you wanted?

seduction.
temptation.

do it again...

i want to bleed more.

run your nails down my legs,
push you fingers into my spine.

bite me,
scratch me,
hurt me.
make me bleed.

loose yourself in me.
let me take control.

wrap your fingers tighter round my throat.
i want to feel you more.

bite me,
scratch me,
hurt me,
bleed me.

seduction,
temptaion.

for this moment...

you are mine.





...this peice is another section of the story im writting...

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Mmmmm...

Theres a certain amount of power in complete giving isn't there? Getting off on your partner getting off.

Wicked stuff!

I'm going to have a cold shower now...

 

[katmeow]

Hot!

 

[Backo]

can you hear me?
im right here underneath you.
can you feel me?
im right here inside of you.

.[/I]

YAY!

 

[E-girl]

i just LOVE that last line, i dont know why. it just GRABBED me and set the whole piece into perspective.

You are mine.

 

[rewiiired]

This entire poem is dark, sexual, seductive... very good work. I find not many people can write about this kind of experience and covey it in a way that does it justice... at least in my eyes. But it's all here: tension and release, animalistic impulses, the desire to possess and control and devour... the sweet, beautiful, dark electric between two people.... damn good work.