Faux Prophet

[RareForm]

I separate my ‘Self from Others
As if I have some special compass
Only I can fathom in this Sea of Souls
I attempt to Beacon the Truth
Wanting to lead others away from the Rocks
They scoff
Fool’ they cry
You would lead us to destruction
Look at you ! they say
You are Failed
Destitute
Both in Gold
and in Joy of Spirit
Mirrored, I see they speak truth
I am not as I am
I am Delusion.


( Who do you believe?
Do you believe Your 'Self? )

 

[Altered_Soul9]

Very different and very nice I enjoyed this alot.

 

[IhaveNoLegs]

please stop reading my thoughts. Or else im going to start wearing a magnent helmet

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

^^heh - try a tin foil hat - cheaper.

I love the "bibilcal" feeling that you give with this, another brilliant change of form!

 

[RareForm]

ha. thanks you guys for the replies. ^^good to see you again DS.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Good to see you too (and be seen!)

 

[neverwas]

excellent work hun. somewhat differs from your other stuff but stil shines as much

 

[Dandy]

Great work,

good to see a somewhat 'different' approach being taken,

insightful.

 

[NeoMagic]

deep...mad props rareform.

 

[RareForm]

very good to see you magic. hope you will post some more on here. thanks for the reply.

 

[NeoMagic]

maybe ;p

 

[cherub]

We all like to see ourselves special from others some have a nature of a soul that makes them that way.

you follow your own path i am sure you will do just fine

Great work as always

 

[ev0l]

i like the use of capitalization.
almost like titles.