"Farewell"

[PurrrinInOk]

There is no God in the sky tonight
No sign of heaven anywhere in sight
All that was true is left behind
Once I could see now I am blind
Don't want your dreams you try to sell
To my faith I say farewell

She makes life sweeter than the sun
I'll get so high I'll come undone
I bow my head to confess
To her my soul I profess

She will heal my wounds and set me free
She is Jesus Christ on ecstacy
Just one more taste then I'll be done
Come on baby let's get spun!

A thousand lips a thousand tongues
A thousand throats a thousand lungs
A thousand ways to make it true
She will to do terrible things to you

 

[IXinX]

good rhyming, but i am not a fan of the structure of traditional verse.

good subject matter too, could feel your dismay

 

[PurrrinInOk]

^ Thanks

 

[cherub]

I think is sweet in a sense,,, maybe be a bit tradition as said above but the feeling is definately there.