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fall out

colicolo

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what is it excatly that you miss?
when you wont talk to me...
where distance is growing strong
why does the gap in this trust have to be?

how is there any health in this?
if i can't sleep, with you or without...
are you aware of how i feel?
can i risk this silent cry becoming a shout

have you smelt the stench of burning flames?
could you feel, a warm heart in your hugging arms...
is it ever meant to be for or with you
do you feel me round your neck wearing these charms

did you ever see the magic in the colour of your eyes?
where, do all your troubles go...
will you ever share them, with me?
were we the fall out or the after glow
 
I like how you're experimenting with your own forms... making the act of writing poetry like a game or puzzle. It can definitely be fun! :) And I like the idea of every line being posed as a question.
 
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