fal l i n g.

[ice-9]

Looking into your eyes, a fantasy
......the reflection of what could be
...........a touch of intimate sensuality?
......................i'll hold you just this once
.............................i'll stop time in its place
Sink into my being, baby
...................................show me your true face
..................................i'll fold my heart in sections
......................................maybe keep it on a tether
.....................................pace myself, sans impromptu
......................................'cause baby, it's a wonderfully
...................................................................dangerous
...........................................................................thing,
.............................................................................when
...................................................................................i'm
....................................................................................falling
.........................................................................................fast
...........................................................................................over
...............................................................................................you.

 

[Shuddr2Think]

wow...
i like the way you wrote this..
and the words are great..
:D

..................................i'll fold my heart in sections
......................................maybe keep it on a tether

 

[Furnace]

Damn, this piece is something else...
Very Irvine Welsh-esque.
Well done. Well done, indeed.

 

[CARESS]

Wonderfully written...I think each time we take a chance on loving someone we are trying to get to that "place" within ourselves you described so well.
Caress

 

[Sara Tonin]

Fabulous! :D

 

[harraser]

I always like your words Ice
this was trully great

 

[E-girl]

you make me feel all fuzzy inside...

 

[caffeine_voices]

fits snug tight! great work ice *applauds*

 

[Sweetpea]

The first 3 lines are my favorite
You're romantic

 

[KHsweety03]

*applauses*

 

[cherub]

the power of the words and where they take you, had me convinced your heart was to someone.
I read this several times, almost made me hope

 

[alykitty]

you NEVER cease to amaze me, ice...this was so nicely written..I absolutely loved it...

'cause baby, it's a wonderfully
dangerous
thing,
when
i'm
falling
So very true hun....wonderfully dangerous, I couldn't think of better words to use...
NICE!!!
[ 15 December 2001: Message edited by: alykitty ]

 

[Angelight]

soooooo goood iceee

 

[sometimes]

thats beautiful.

 

[ice-9]

thanks.
too bad its addressed to no one, eh? wanted to catch the light-hearted/light-headed feeling one gets not quite at the start.
inspired by a memory.