Failure

[Altered_Soul9]

Wait.....
Listen to the sound of forever.
The reflecting light breaks away to shine on someone else.
Wait.....
God reaches over you to whisper into someone else's ear.
....
Patience is a deadly virtue that holds no love.
Pain walks in its footsteps.
Boredom and ignorance sleep next to its side.
Summon the strength to fight the temptations.
Fabricate a certain power to hinder the pause in time.
Failure is unacceptable
Failure leads to death.
Failure will break you on its knee.

Can you wait for the failure of eternity?

 

[skjalff]

I liked this one a lot. The first paragraph reminded me of fight club's "god hates you" .. These lines:

<<
Wait.....
Listen to the sound of forever.
The reflecting light breaks away to shine on someone else.
Wait.....
God reaches over you to whisper into someone else's ear.
>>

are so very intricate yet incredibly powerful!

Great work!




skjalff

 

[skjalff]

one word - *BUMP*!!!

 

[FixXxer]

i hope i can wait.. dont seem to be too far off tho

 

[RareForm]

I liked this one a lot. The first paragraph reminded me of fight club's "god hates you" .. These lines:

<<
Wait.....
Listen to the sound of forever.
The reflecting light breaks away to shine on someone else.
Wait.....
God reaches over you to whisper into someone else's ear.
>>

are so very intricate yet incredibly powerful!

Great work!




skjalff

That was also my favorite part.

somehow i missed this one..

 

[cherub]

Excellent work, The tone has a sereal feeling to it. Outstanding!