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satricion

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This world is a fish of delightful adventure
it shimmers and shakes and wriggles it's bones

It's insides expand to envelop it's outsides
and everything inside is coloured by you

Explore this world this meadow of tastes
that grow all around you to include your mind

Nothing is sacred inside this cathedral of
cascading thoughts reaching critical mass



And as they explode you'll sweat and you'll giggle
and inside you'll feel like a jumble of toys

The patterns you live in are hard to remember so
just make some new ones and cover the walls

Your mind is a cocktail of powerful secrets
so aim them to heaven and figure out that cloud

Bend everything through your translation prism
transcribe confusions of paper whirlpools


Notice somewhere...inside...is you.


Push, squeeze, squint and blow cyclones
of concepts and colours of delicious hue

Relish the spiral of streamers and circles
and inhale a pillow of sweet soft cold cream

Your numbers are up and your shapes to the side and
everything's born inside everything else

It's the else you'll look out for
from now on, forever

and somewhere...inside...is you.
 
I really like this... it's cerebral / expansive, in the way of psychedelic realisations.

Some experimental and fresh phrasing, and poise in the lines.

Artistic wisdom:

The patterns you live in are hard to remember so
just make some new ones and cover the walls

Please post more! ;)
 
I adore this.
You're depiction of life is exquisite.

My favourite extract -

"This world is a fish of delightful adventure
it shimmers and shakes and wriggles it's bones

It's insides expand to envelop it's outsides
and everything inside is coloured by you".
 
(Wordy),

For further reading, see "The Yellow Wallpaper," by Charlotte Perkins Gilman
(1860-1935).

'There are things in that paper that nobody knows but me, or ever will.'
 
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