face down in a pool of blood and your only fear is drowning?

[undead]

i could ask for nothing more
bloody noses, broken bones, shattered hearts
invocations of a somber massacre are all you leave behind
killing dreams! you said to me you would never leave
funny that now i have to trace your footprints in the snow
blood and all, they leave a trace right to the source of all my pain
and it hurts me to say that this night will not be over until youre slain!

the curtains have been shredded by the hatchet that i held
and the floors are still stained bloody red from the victims that i killed
the window panes have been trenched from your finger nails
your tounge is tied and twisted and your screams have only failed
distance plays a factor in this game of cat and mouse
the ghosts of your demise will always haunt this house
the walls will tell of stories that no one dares to hear
and the only thing of you ill spare is your undesirable fear

 

[RareForm]

you rhymed some good words there. i kind of read the title to a from autumn to ashes song, so i automatically liked it :D

but seriously, wonderfully worded..

 

[undead]

thanks man! i was listening to into the moat at the time of writing that hehehe... so i had some brutal technical influences. i from autumn to ashes btw! i dont care what anyone says!