facade

[Shnouzerpuff]

Your eyes
Those deep, inky pools
iris. beautiful.
brilliant kaliedescope of colour
the tears
collected in the corner
slowly drawn down that
long elegant cheekbone

and those 'to die for' beestung lips
A shimmer or a slight reflection
yet no more genuine than
that enticing shade of
Deep. Cherry. Red.

Drowning in feeling
floating in emotion
staring through me
a mask
a facade
a moment that never ends.

 

[up all night]

The pleasure is in the details and my favourite poems/ stories are usually about a single moment. I also like bodies of work that leave a million blanks that the reader gets to fill in themself.

Nice work.

 

[katmeow]

/\/\/\ What she said!!

Beautifully descriptive work

 

[neverwas]

 

[Shnouzerpuff]

Thanks guys

I wrote that after such a beautiful day.