exsanguinate.

[Raz]

it isn't that i hate you
but I need you to die for me
it's such a little thing to ask
such a little gift to give
i don't really love you
but i don't like what's inside of me
and the only way I can keep on going
is knowing it hurts you too to live
every day you suffer more
you think you know what you're fighting for
you think you know why you strive
why you're keeping us alive
but there's something I know that you don't
and if I do this right you won't
there is no us
there's only me
love is blind
and you can't see
every day when we caress
each time my head's against your chest
when I'm closer to your heart
i'm only finding the right part
the right space
the right place

...

to stick the knife in.

...

...

exsanguinate.

 

[Mehm]

very ruthless, I like the treacherous nature of it all. calculating..especially the last part

 

[colicolo]

raz, ur work is always grand. this one is bold and no exception to the rule. awesome stuff.

 

[realm]

Dam....powerful piece man

 

[Doppelganger]

god raz... this made me freeze cold for about 30 seconds.

To echo the poster above, certainly a powerful piece of writing!

 

[doofqueen]

Yes very powerful piece of writing indeed. Nice and raw.. wow!