explicit II

[Raz]

**OBLIGATORY WARNING: graphic descriptions of gay sex ahead, avert ye eyes now if y'all will be so offended..**


your eyes wide from drugs you lead me in and

we don't talk but I kiss you and your teeth smash against mine and

your lip tastes like the blood underneath your skin and

my tongue fills your mouth now you're breathing my air and

there's a sweet sweet instant where the amyl hits us both and we reel for a second that feels like a minute and when we kiss again it's all wetness and heat and everything slow-motion until my fingers find your nipple and


it all speeds up again.


...


i squeeze and there's always some sadism there that surprises me and

you get that submissive look in your eye and

i backhand you across the face and

my hand grabs your dick and

it's bigger than i thought it would be and

i squeeze it through that tight leather and

i eat the groan that escapes your mouth and

you taste the spit that escapes my mouth and

there's that taste of blood closer this time and

i turn you around and hold you down by the neck and

my dick finds your ass underneath leather and

pokes harder and

you fumble till your pants are down and

i take a moment just to look and

then i'm teasing you with it and

waiting for you to ask me for it because you know you're going to get it but i want you to ask for it and

you ask and i push so slowly;


so


fucking


slowly;


and your tailbone kisses my groin and

for a while there's just slow thrusts and

i grab your harness and

watch my cock in and out of you and

you start making noises and

my left hand grips your throat and

i can feel the rumble of your fuck noises and

the motion stays the same because i'm teasing you with it and


more amyl.


...


both hands are on your shoulders now so i can push further in and

my hands wander where they can and

your balls sound wet against me and

your head hits the wall twice and

it turns me on more and

i start imagining doing this with someone else in front of you and

your sex noises stifled by a face full of meat and

i could do this all night but you tell me to cum and


i do


i leave


no other words are spoken


and i return to the dancefloor.


...

 

[katmeow]

*fans self*

This reminds me a little of the writing style in The Bride Stripped Bare. Obviously from a different perspective, but just in the way the sensuality and rawness drips from every sentence.

 

[(Wordy)]

This is scintillating... so wild, vivid, sensuous. The opening is simply awesome:

your eyes wide from drugs you lead me in and

we don't talk but I kiss you and your teeth smash against mine and

your lip tastes like the blood underneath your skin and

Very, very hot.

 

[Strawberry_lovemuffin]

Indeed! If we breeders are finding this hot it's a testament to both your writing and I guess, the surprising fact that there can be elements of commonality in every erotic experience - no matter what your sexual preference.

 

[New]

Oh my. That was very sexually charged. And fascinating. I was on the edge of my seat the entire time.

 

[Rated E]

That was excellent. I loved the ending:

i leave


no other words are spoken


and i return to the dancefloor.


...

 

[atrocious]

I got hard.

 

[doofqueen]

wow! thats so raw!