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supersonic

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Ok, so I guess I've been on a role with this whole love poem thing. But hey you write what you feel right? So this is my new enhanced version 2.0, I'm even more infatuated with you, poem. Now I know I should just give this to her, but I'm just waiting for the right time, there's always a right time. Heheh, all these stupid helicopters keep flying by my dorm cause msu just won. Woopee doo.
In a sea of compliments
I wouldn't be able to catch enough fish to do you justice
In a million words of beauty
none would be perfect enough to describe you
In all the sensations of the flesh
none would be as good as the nape of your neck
A million epiphanes would never be as revelating as one minute with you
Because just at the sheer chance of catching your eyes a thousand different emotions never felt before cling to me like superglue
Oh and if you only knew
that I scream in ecstacy from the smell of you
What it is with you is that everyday seems grander and true,
that each second I live I burn hotter from the thought of you
It's scary too,
because what you don't feel at all as I do
and then I ruined my chance I had
for just a ridiculous emotional spew
I'd live, but I'd always miss that way you exist that drives me out of control
I'd miss that one feeling that was mutual
And fate it seems has lead us here,
with its oh so casual grace
lead me to thinking how it will be to wake up next to your face
And you can't fight the things that are far deep inside
The things we sometimes denied
And why would you want to?
Don't worry though, you don't make me breathe
No, better yet you breathe along with me, keeping faith warm from despairs cool grasp
You are me, which I see deep inside my heart
I am you the tender voice you've been waiting for so long to start
And no matter if we were to change and we grew,
it wouldn't matter to me one bit because I know what to do.
Grasp your hand tighter, look in your eyes and scream I love you.
 
supersonic,
You definitely have a way with words man. I love the metaphors.
by MSU, do you mean Missouri State University? cuZ I go to Truman State University, bout 1.5 hours away...
just curious.
Keep postin man, I've been really impressed with most of your posts.
*CytocHromE*
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What is it I feel? What is it I see? Could it be real? Or is it the X-ta-C?
 
nope michigan state sorry. Thanks for the compliments, I talked to the girl in question tonight, and I think its going towards the direction of me reading it.
 
wow, yea good post. Definately makes me feel the emotion you were feeling when you wrote it.. i liked it, and i usually hate mushy love poems, but this was more real. I really liked it. You should definately read it to her. Hope it all goes well :-) plur
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E is for Everyone
 
think this was my fav of the ones ive read of urs darl-i luv it, and please do tell her and good luck babe
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i thought it was you i needed nevertheless i have learnt thru the pain i needed me
 
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