Even Lloyd Dobler was rejected as a suitor but ended up with the girl at the end.

[Furnace]

hi.
get out.
wait.
not anymore.
stop!
make me.
please.
don't.

now what?
there isn't a 'now what?'
I'll get around you, then.
You'll try.
Watch me.
You won't do it.
Who's gonna stop me?
Me.
You and whose army?

~
Stop it now.
What's wrong?

This isn't how it's supposed to go.
It's too vauge, there's not enough substance.

Read it again.
Think about your darkest fears.
Think about your life being torn.
Remember the worst day.
Then, think about willing to give anything to relive that day,
only to escape an endless amount of days that make that worst day,
a day that you took for granted.
Try and escape that.

Your hesitation was the end of you.
Your death to me was not mourned,
and shall never be mourned.
~

So, now what?
When will you learn that there was never a "now what?"

 

[Rollingrrl]

OMG! awesome work. wonderfully vague and stark. i likes it honey.