Euphoria

[New]

Put it on, fit it right,
This is here for tonight
Move a groove, bust a heel
Make your focus hard like steel
Slip in,
to the room
The flow of people dancing
The prayers,
of the mute
The grateful silent chanting
I cannot see the road tomorrow
I cannot pay the bills next week
I cannot wait for E come up
I'll dance my liquid at the peak!

Being pushed around by the
World's fears and pains
Makes the pirouette
and the shimmy just the same
Stomp, Stomp, Left, Right!
Make it here and make it light!
Go to Master's Rave tonight!
It's quite a flow of love and might!
That's where you'll find me, in the white!

 

[colicolo]

New, I'm enjoying your work more and more. It makes me feel free and 17 again. Keep up the awesome work.

 

[New]

^that's a pretty tall compliment. Thank you.

 

[doofqueen]

awesome structure and rythem

 

[wastedwalrus]

Your diction and tone are both astoundingly powerful. Great, great poem. The rhymes are well-placed but also subtle... they don't overpower the element of the poem so everything else shines right through. Brilliant.