molokoplus
Greenlighter
Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.
Erotica I
The dirtiest longing I ever had...no sex involved, no
mere fucking; the rude, full-scale laugh of the thick-fingered man at the bar,
too loud,
just a little too loud
because I'm trailing my finger around the sticky beer-ring on the tabletop
real quietly
and kind of liking it
breathing deep, just
deep, deep breathing in that stale sweat smell,
under the dim smear of the last dingy lightbulb.
and I'm kind of liking-
liking the way my body feels here:
the way the grit and the ugly,
and the airborne taste of unwashed flesh
sticks to my hair,
to my skin
and slips underneath my clothing, uninvited,
with coarse, grasping palms,
and I'm kind of liking it.
Erotica I
The dirtiest longing I ever had...no sex involved, no
mere fucking; the rude, full-scale laugh of the thick-fingered man at the bar,
too loud,
just a little too loud
because I'm trailing my finger around the sticky beer-ring on the tabletop
real quietly
and kind of liking it
breathing deep, just
deep, deep breathing in that stale sweat smell,
under the dim smear of the last dingy lightbulb.
and I'm kind of liking-
liking the way my body feels here:
the way the grit and the ugly,
and the airborne taste of unwashed flesh
sticks to my hair,
to my skin
and slips underneath my clothing, uninvited,
with coarse, grasping palms,
and I'm kind of liking it.
