Echoes on a passing memoir

[Dakeva]

...and this to shall pass

Endlessly echoed easing the melodramatic mood
As my pessimistic eyes captured what was to be a final glance.
Bittersweet whispers endure balmy summer nights.
And it appears I have endured all but a fleeting memory.

Three days ago quite oblivious.
Three years ago a saline saturated portrait.
Three minutes ago a reoccurring ghost.
These moments I thought so departed.

Mahogany memoirs defy occasion.
Adjacently revolting against repressive etiquettes.
The tormented thorn besieges the path to my sacrament.
Lesser elegances of circumstance plead for me.

...as I search for means to rise above this all.

 

[E-girl]

And it appears I have endured all but a fleeting memory.
you are incredible. you... your words... your mind. you will never truly know how some of us admire u and your work.

 

[Dakeva]

Thank you very much as always for your words.
I’m however far from worthy of admiration I’m just a guy who is trying...
Sometimes I hit, often I miss and at the end of the day I’ll take friendship, love and maybe a little respect over the praise .
(the praise is nice to though)
:D

 

[Ballyhoo]

Thought provoking and mysteriously colorful. Words seem to flow almost in a melodious manner.
Respect, love and freindship you cant possibly lack. Always enjoy praise for it seems most suffer from myxedema and these are callous times were praise is worth emotionally more than gold.

 

[Dagny]

All that you should ever need I would move the world to get to you. You will never want for anything as long as I can help it, I'll be your go-to guy any day.
This was wonderful. The last non-italics line, says it all doesn't it. Beautiful dear, and as graceful as I have always known you to be.

 

[ice-9]

 

[Shuddr2Think]

Three days ago quite oblivious.
Three years ago a saline saturated portrait.
Three minutes ago a reoccurring ghost.
These moments I thought so departed
wow.
excellent.

 

[frostyangel]

good work, I can never get enough!!

Lesser elegances of circumstance plead for me.
I love way you word yourself.

 

[PixieGirl]

Dave I will always be your friend as well, through anything your day may bring, I always think of you with a smile.