Early morning rambles

[Mean Girl]

(I am not a writer, not artistic by any means, but a couple of nights ago I had a dream in which I wrote this poem, and over the last 2 days I've managed to piece it together, racking my brain to remember all the lines. It's not something I've heard somewhere else and just remembered though, it is original)


This is my favourite part of the day
The minutes in which I've just woken up
And the sun comes in cracks through the blinds
You're not awake yet, and for a moment
I don't have work
I don't have bills, or an ego to feed
I don't even look at the clock
Slowly but surely you feel the twitches in the bed
The changes in temperature that tell you I've turned off the electric blanket
Sitting here, watching you sleep
Until...
You wake up, and give me *that* look
I know I'll be getting some today
Sometimes I think of you like I do copulation
I don't want it just yet, but I like knowing it's there
It is comforting in the winter months
Makes me feel something
Like I am cold, but not alone
And in these few moments in the morning before we both go our separate ways
I tell you I love you
I've told you a thousand times, each time meaning it more than before
Hoping you'll remember
My heart and the mornings like these.

 

[nickthecheese]

I love you

 

[katmeow]

And in these few moments in the morning before we both go our separate ways
I tell you I love you
I've told you a thousand times, each time meaning it more than before
Hoping you'll remember
My heart and the mornings like these.

Word up

*grins*

I like it girl!!

 

[bisKi]

very nice :D

very very nice, especially these lines ::

I tell you I love you
I've told you a thousand times, each time meaning it more than before

you expressed it better than i did

 

[Mean Girl]

Ah, thanks guys

 

[smileyfish]

I'm very surpised to hear that you're not normally a writer! This is really quite well crafted and so very well captures this stage of a relationship (living together, settled into routine but still in love). I hope to read more of your work

Smiley


P.S. Nick I think you must be one lucky guy!

 

[plazma]

As has been said, for someone who claims not to be artistic, you're going to have a bit of trouble sticking to that claim after writing this.

Very nice work.

-plaz out-

 

[frostyangel]

This was great.. come back again.. I loved the ending!!

 

[nickthecheese]

Bump...cause you expressed it much better than I did

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

This is so beautifully simple and genuine. I loved it - - - perfectly written from start to finish. .
Great work, you should be really pleased. It evoked such a lovely warm feeling within. Wow.

 

[madmick19]

awwwwww................... that was so sweet

 

[RareForm]

i smiled reading this.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

You must write some more!

 

[sonicnature]

You write very well Meanie! very sweet hehe