Dying

[Slack]

So sad and crying from the inside
Numb and depleted
Simply defeated
Can’t shake the face
And every time I come from a start to finish
I find nothing has changed at all
Everything deplenished
You say you love me
And I do as well, always have
But can’t you find your reasons are just unfounded
I say, I’m completely stricken, dumbfounded
You say you want the world
But wouldn’t the world like an inch to breathe?
I feel confined,
Defined
And prodded by you
Simply feeling captively blue

 

[Slack]

 

[CARESS]

"You say you want the world
But wouldn’t the world like an inch to breathe?"
Nice, very nice. That line in particular got me thinking. I liked this.
Caress
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The Prince is never going to come, everybody knows that; and maybe Sleeping Beauty's dead. Anne Rice
[This message has been edited by CARESS (edited 26 May 2001).]

 

[ice-9]

i like this, welcome to the forum.

 

[Slack]

Thanks a lot ya'll!!
*Hugs*

 

[Slack]

 

[JustChad]

I really like this... but I don't like feeling that way

~chad

 

[Sara Tonin]

I just noticed that you and I had the same thought process going on in our posts a few days apart from eachother. It is eerie and I swear I did not plagairise your work. I didn't even read your post until this evening. Strange coincidence!