drunken words, truth and sorrow

[roarkisdead]

i know he hurt you,
but i am not him.
i give what i can
my love and my word.
but still you back away.
i didn't want this,
not to fall in love again.
i have been hurt like you
one too many times.
pain and sorrow,
i still try.
i know the world is rough
it is a scary place to be.
evil people, evil things.
i may not be your one.
even not your love
but just give me a chance.
thats all i ask.
i can't promise you everything,
though i would like to try.
all i can give you is myself,
my faults and my weekness,
my word and my love.
ps. very drunk and saying goodbye to an lost love.
[ 04 April 2002: Message edited by: roarkisdead ]

 

[harraser]

hehe you shouldnt have said you were drunk, this peice is good so I never would have noticed

i may not be your one.
even not your love
but just give me a chance.
thats all i ask.

 

[Fetish Jester]

i know he hurt you,
but i am not him.
That is a very good beginning. Straight into it. I wish I could do that . I like the whole stream of concious idea that is in it as well, it really works, it's as if you're listing those things as they go through your head. All in all, it's a mood piece that works.
Awww yeah.

 

[E-girl]

i was going to quote the part that Fetish Jester quoted. its deep and meaningful and it gets to the heart of your emotions. i think whoever you wrote this for needs to keep that phrase in mind.

i know he hurt you,
but i am not him.
i have trouble remembering this at times too. the past is the past.

 

[Rollingrrl]

yeah the past always haunts us. I was in such a position, some people can deal with it and some people can't. it still takes time. sorry that you came along too soon, roarkisdead