drowning

[beanpoophead]

Saved me from drowning
I couldn’t help it
but tumble down
into your arms
where you held me
and i knew
it was going to be ok

when you came around
i couldn’t help but see
me + you
now that were
together
I can’t help but
be afraid
of losing everything
that you give me

Giving so much pleasure
without taking
any of my pain
cos i know you know
i’ve never felt like this
before
all cos you made me smile

small of my back
upon your bed
staring up at the ceiling
counting the moments
while they pass me by
but i cant lose you
like a feeling
pain cant be
part of this game

kiss me deep
and hold the moment
while we drown
in this sweet symphony
that won’t give up
playing that last note
just as we take our last breath

and drown

 

[katmeow]

I can’t help but
be afraid
of losing everything
that you give me

Scary feelin aint it

You've posted some good work here!!

 

[-|Twiztd|-]

^I Agree: What I've Read So Far Has Been Good:

 

[cherub]

once again very proud of your writting. You have a great sense of word flow, meaning and imagery.

Great stuff!

 

[Altered_Soul9]

I great usage of words. Nice