dreams

[lilmissSierra69]

Black dreams, dark dreams, dreams of horror, dreams of betrayal, but are they just dreams or are they memories, flashbacks, flashbacks of a time that hurts to remember, a time you try to forget but everything brings back memories of, memories of betrayal, memories that abase you, memories of terror, the terror of being held down and forced into submission, forced into submission of your innocence, forced into submission of your body, mind, and soul, raped, black dreams, dark dreams, dreams of horror, dreams of betrayal, dreams of rape.

 

[RareForm]

I liked it alot...

wonderful stuff....i like how you wrote it in paragraph form as well....

Thanks for sharing!

~Drew

 

[LostProphecy]

Kudos. I enjoyed this very much. It's almost like a glimpse into the mind of someone, daunted by genious. Great write.

 

[lilmissSierra69]

thank you

 

[neverwas]

i liked the way you laid out this one. it created a different aprroach from having it normal poetry layout

good work.