Dreaming (At Best)

[DeirdreScott]

Harmony of musical art
tapped out on the keys
of both our perfectly tuned hearts
please remember me

when I am fallen and destroyed
In darkness alone
When sorrow I cannot avoid
return to your throne

As the sole ruler of my soul
I worship you, dear
I am your Desiree Nicole
Please banish my fear...

Kiss my lips ever so gently
Fill me with your light
Gaze into my eyes intently
never leave my sight

My dear, these things I say to you
Underneath my breath
Though these emotions do imbue
They are dreams at best...

 

[plazma]

This is a really nicely written piece, with powerful imagery and a tug at the heartstrings.

-plaz out-

 

[RareForm]

^indeed so. led into that driving line so beautifully. *thumbs up* Desi.

 

[cherub]

lovely done,, makes you get the floaty cloud feeling

 

[yakksoho]

Amazing, very dark but moving also it is very beautiful