dream

[spiralmind]

un stoppable touchable savable

no merci in this realm in this mind
i cant define what i perceive of what's
real and what's not. i see in the distance
of what i think may be there but really
is imagination running crazy

are you real? i can see but cant feel
stop playing tricks on me
what have i done for you to repay me
there's no boundries in my world
come with me ill show you, we'll fly
until we fall and all expectations of what
you see in dreams will come to reality

in this dream it is my reality which is your imagination
your imagination is my reality in this dream
im following the path of illumination
but this path is further then it may seem

we're falling in a downward spiral
grab ahold of what you have left
because in a blink of an eye it will be gone like so long
all the shit ive already seen and then some
wont compare to this eternal eternity
that's turning to me, screaming in my face
this never ending race to the back of my mind
and forth to the memories i bind
come along as i write this song subconciously
unconsiously because really.. there are no boundries

in this reality everything's directed at me
just like the love i can see that would be
perfect for me.
even though i know my reality isnt what it could be
i dream of what should be.
what's that? a feel a void of my lost reality which
was just with me but now is gone
im back to the other side of my lost world
i hope you enjoyed your visit with me in this song

 

[cherub]

You have a way with words I like this very much

I seem to relate to confusion and matters of the heart

i like this part the best

are you real? i can see but cant feel
stop playing tricks on me
what have i done for you to repay me
there's no boundries in my world
come with me ill show you, we'll fly
until we fall and all expectations of what
you see in dreams will come to reality

good work !

 

[neverwas]

we're falling in a downward spiral
grab ahold of what you have left
because in a blink of an eye it will be gone like so long
all the shit ive already seen and then some
wont compare to this eternal eternity
that's turning to me, screaming in my face
this never ending race to the back of my mind
and forth to the memories i bind
come along as i write this song subconciously
unconsiously because really.. there are no boundries

well written hun...so easily related to

starfalls

 

[SnowFrog]

in this reality everything's directed at me
just like the love i can see that would be
perfect for me.
even though i know my reality isnt what it could be
i dream of what should be.
what's that? a feel a void of my lost reality which
was just with me but now is gone
im back to the other side of my lost world
i hope you enjoyed your visit with me in this song

I really love the way ur words flow together....Nice Work!!!

~B