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dream love never reality...

LadyWidow

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I look into your ravishing eyes
My breath caught in my throught
Your hands clasped around my neck
My body pressed into the sheets of my bed
Your cape covering my sight
You say to me "fear not for life may now be yours"
I do not understand right now
I do not care
You have me in a trance
The only thing I seem to focus on is your hands on my neck
Your body so close to mine
Your hot breath on my neck
I catch a better glimpse into your eyes
Cold and lifeless
My heart I try to keep silent
But it beats out of my chest
Your lips brush mine
And then the sharp sensation pierces the side of my neck
And my life slowly and sweetly slips away
My body moves in slow motion over the covers
Your arms hold me in place
You stop..."Are you ready for your place?"
You question
"I am ready" I whisper in shivers of passionate coldness
And just before the room fades to darkness of eternal sleep from my nightly vampire...
The alarm goes off...and I wake for another day of reality.
 
wpw where do i start with this peice :) it was excellent. it was seductive and sensual in a way that made me want to grab someone and reow...

...anyways...

i really liked your wording in this and the ending was a bit of a suprise but it suited the peice really well :)
 
Yeah, I liked it too.. it was really sensual, and I agree with starfalls... RAR!

good work
 
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