Dream inspired words

[robatussin]

last night i had a dream where
i was on a train
my subconscious seemed to be
forecasting rain
cause on the long long train ride
we didnt hit a tunnel
and i know my freud enough
to know that means trouble
And i dont want to wake up
and analyze my dreams every day
so ill drink and smoke
in hopes that my dreams will go away


Just popped into my head in the shower this morning. Any thoughts or feedback?

 

[InHerOwnWrite]

it amused me, particularly the "and i know my freud enough/ to know that means trouble."
you're a clever one, roboman.

 

[(Wordy)]

last night i had a dream where
i was on a train
my subconscious seemed to be
forecasting rain
cause on the long long train ride
we didnt hit a tunnel
and i know my freud enough
to know that means trouble

Yeah, that definitely made me chuckle...

*imagines Freud stroking his beard, deep in thought*

 

[colicolo]

cute