hey guys, my first post in this section. some critisim please!
I dream in silence
Amazed at the simplicity of complexity
Yet ever so wanting to believe
To stop the defunct sceneiro of my thoughts
Only to come full circle with confusion
To await the silence again.
In my dreams, the future I see
Tomorrow and beyond
Bright, inviting and warm it seems
Then to dust it falls and scatters
To understand the meaning is to step into the madness
Facing an uncertain life, an episode of the lost.
I break free from dreamland
Wake and look for reality
Searching high, and low finding breadcrumbs to follow
As I walk, they are scarce, they must have been eaten
Why is my path being taken from me
Which way to go now, what is right
What is that ahead?
Another silent night
Faceless visions, without cause
A meaning ever present, but unclear
To shadowed by uncertainty, clouded by myself
The fog of my thoughts is drawn out
I cannot see, traveling on I still hope.
Will life present itself to me
Can I find the meaning to my unconscious thought
Or doomed to a life of unclear, over thought decisions
The answer lies within my sleep, or in my wake
I cannot find the right solution to the chaotic thoughts
Can I bring order to chaos within the bounds of life?
Peace comes from strange sources
But so familiar and welcomed
It does not come from within but outside of me
The source of my peace is beautiful and willing
Waiting as I to understand where, and when to strike
To push out the fog, to see unencumbered
I dream for the peace, and the clarity
I have everyday
But second it to over thought
And blinded by indecision
Time to wake
To open the door to life
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Mine is the wisdom of the ages.
I hold the key to the mysteries of life.
Casting my seeds on fertile ground
I nurture them with constancy and purpose.
My sights are fixed.
My gaze unchanging.
Unyielding, inexorable and deep
I advance with steady, unslackened gait,
The solid earth beneath me.
[This message has been edited by e_GoTrip (edited 20 February 2001).]
I dream in silence
Amazed at the simplicity of complexity
Yet ever so wanting to believe
To stop the defunct sceneiro of my thoughts
Only to come full circle with confusion
To await the silence again.
In my dreams, the future I see
Tomorrow and beyond
Bright, inviting and warm it seems
Then to dust it falls and scatters
To understand the meaning is to step into the madness
Facing an uncertain life, an episode of the lost.
I break free from dreamland
Wake and look for reality
Searching high, and low finding breadcrumbs to follow
As I walk, they are scarce, they must have been eaten
Why is my path being taken from me
Which way to go now, what is right
What is that ahead?
Another silent night
Faceless visions, without cause
A meaning ever present, but unclear
To shadowed by uncertainty, clouded by myself
The fog of my thoughts is drawn out
I cannot see, traveling on I still hope.
Will life present itself to me
Can I find the meaning to my unconscious thought
Or doomed to a life of unclear, over thought decisions
The answer lies within my sleep, or in my wake
I cannot find the right solution to the chaotic thoughts
Can I bring order to chaos within the bounds of life?
Peace comes from strange sources
But so familiar and welcomed
It does not come from within but outside of me
The source of my peace is beautiful and willing
Waiting as I to understand where, and when to strike
To push out the fog, to see unencumbered
I dream for the peace, and the clarity
I have everyday
But second it to over thought
And blinded by indecision
Time to wake
To open the door to life
------------------
Mine is the wisdom of the ages.
I hold the key to the mysteries of life.
Casting my seeds on fertile ground
I nurture them with constancy and purpose.
My sights are fixed.
My gaze unchanging.
Unyielding, inexorable and deep
I advance with steady, unslackened gait,
The solid earth beneath me.
[This message has been edited by e_GoTrip (edited 20 February 2001).]
