Don't even wast your time with this one

[ARo of the west]

A poem that makes no sense

Watch the gravy splitter-splatter
As it drips upon the platter
Lap it up and say, "That's good!"
Gravy is your favorite food

Chop the tree and watch it fall
Share the wood with one and all
Build a fire; Watch it burn
Pump the butter in the churn
Scoop it out and toast some bread
Combine the two; That's what I said
Eat up, chow down; That shit tastes good
Butter is your favorite food

Raise a chicken; Rear a duck
Hear it quack and see it cluck
Anytime that you feel stuck
Well, flesh you'll chew and marrow suck

Tightrope on a picket fence
Write a poem that makes no sense
If the people say, "You're dense."
Just smile and nod, don't play defense

There are those who wish they could
And if you asked you know I would
Life is short, but life is good
So just have fun; You know you should

 

[3rd Realm]

Interesting.

 

[RareForm]

A poem that makes no sense

Watch the gravy splitter-splatter
As it drips upon the platter
Lap it up and say, "That's good!"
Gravy is your favorite food

This part really caught my attention and stuck throughout the poem...this was cool.

 

[froggygirl]

lol.. that was freaking awesome!

 

[onlysweetpea]

I like!

Writing doesn't always have to make sense. Sometimes its about the sounds it produces, or how everyone can read the same piece and get something different out of it.

 

[skjalff]

kinda like a childrens poem, its playful and lighthearted and def rose my mood better than many pieces that did make sense thanks for sharing!


skjalff

 

[BrightEyesIsMe]

that was really cool. not many like that...good work at being a one of a kind, those are what brings out a smile in everyone.

 

[cherub]

great, just a great piece of work is all i can say