DON'T CLOSE THE DOOR TONITE

[frostyangel]

Don't close the door
one more time.....
he says
let me know you just for alittle
while longer.......
for I will be alone after tonite
the cheap sadness of anothers
eyes knowing that you just took
all of their happiness away
crazy beautiful....ahhh this
thing we call love, which only
this excitement wakes you in the
night.
peace to know that someone is
thinking of you tonite.
rest for me....because I find no sleep
those stirring echos...memories
which we only remember the
good when it is all gone away
but the bad was which made
me hate not what you were,
but what you made me become
not tonite please, i want the door
left open....as she cries to herself
knowing everything is so wrong
not wanting to change what
was suppose to be......suppose to
be good
finding all the emptiness in
actually nothing, which
calls to the satisfaction of
hope
why did you keep it shut
so noone could see inside,
of how wonderful this life
was to become
that's why she is leaving
you tonite, making your
fears yours again
brushing of all that weight
you released for someone
else to carry
good nite, this door will
not be closed tonite
or for the rest of my life...............

 

[E-girl]

the happiest day for me, was the day you finally opened the door. not just the physical door that had been closed for so long, but doors to a thousand possibilities. i hope happiness finds you.

 

[rollEpollE]

I have read this for the third time and gotten something new from it everytime. Your words are very captivating. The emotions you express are very apparent. I look forward to read more of your work. Great job. rollE

 

[up all night]

Very nice.