Doll with a soul (Miracle of birth)

[xenon raider]

Its time to face the age-old truth
There are no answers in the past
A few have tried and all have failed
To see what lies beneath the dust

And in the end there lies a corpse
On bottom of the well you dug
With no emotion you have seen
And thunderous the bell of scorn

It is one's choice to dig the hole
The slightest chance to see the light
A mere doll with glimpse of soul
In shackles of impending life

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

Welcome to words, very insightful and dry piece, wanted to quote but would have ended up quoting the whole thing. A stunning debut!!!

 

[Raz]

I liked the feel of that piece...not sure what the 'thunderous the bell of scorn' line means though..?

 

[cherub]

welcome to words also,,, you have a talent there with words.. it has some questions with power behind them.. great stuff... i think it is very relatable !

 

[xenon raider]

Thanks to you all for your kind words! I'll be coming back here for sure as soon as my inspiration comes back to me

Raz: that line has to do with poetic license mostly i guess, but the interpretation could be something like : "having dug this well, i feel very angry, because i havent found anything down here" i dunno.. I'm considering altering it now



xenon