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do you see me?

crshnbrn200

Bluelighter
Joined
Aug 9, 2005
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Location
somewhere in my mind
It's the way you look at me
that makes me wonder,
what do you see?

Do you see this
callous and cold
person I can be?

The hard
and unfeeling
hiding here?

Tell me, what do
you see?

Or do you see
the other side?
The one that is well hidden
well protected.

The lonely and hurt
little girl
crying silent tears.

The irrational, emotional
moody and forlorn
women I've become.

Tell me, please
I need to know.
Do you see me?
 
yeah man. I often wonder what other people see in me, and what I see in other people. Just so miraculously impossible to tell.
 
it is strange the mix this stirs up in my head of questions but I like it ,, cause it does get you thinking,,a very enlightening piece
 
Dastrix Slogan said:
Its the people who don't take at face value what we are most likely to project, that are the most worth. Well expressed!

i've felt the pain of this many times, and couldn't agree with you more.

nicely written.
 
100% relation coming from my corner. Man people can be fucked up, and what they see just echoes that.

Nice work. :)
 
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