DNA makes me say Hooray!

[Baker]

Thoughts and influences giving birth to ideas
Thoughts produce existence that grow like a tree
Branches divide producing ideas drifting in a sea
Thoughts attached to strings, creating puppetry
These addictions, these ropes that tie me to reality
Cut them off, one by one, schizophrenic psychopathy
Don’t panic I’m happy, devouring a clockwork of complexity
Eating all the answers, indulging its obesity

Travel the fastest routes through the brain
Rocketing through the universe on my own cosmic train
Passing through evolution, in a second of time
Watching the scenery of histories painted walls like graffiti in my mind
Technicoloured organisms like animals on a farm
Watching different days, through psychedelic eyes,
Written in fractals on my hands palm
Out of the window of perception
I have no where else to exist but everywhere,
without the presence of time

The rope is gone, and Alice falls
Into a hole that never ends
An eternity for an entity to let go of reality
An easy escape for a suicidal ego to find a wholesome death
Accept that which lies beyond
And cherish an infinite existence
I bury myself inside a grave of reality’s sludge
and escape my life innocently building walls of love

Is it depression or is it affection
Wallowing in truth and its abundant state,
Humbled by a universe, so simply complex
So blissful, so inspired, by empathy’s own fate
tainted by it’s beauty, and left to reflect
Cheat codes to my soul, Trapped in my heart
Like a child, I am reborn and attached once again
To bring you these words here now, hope not to offend

A snake peers through my mind
Revealing a tree of thoughts
Offering choice to eat an apple
Taken from the tree of awareness
Adam and Eve take the choice to develop perception
as Yin and yang grow a consciousness
To reveal a battle of Chaos verse order
And another world out of Nirvana unfolds to fill the void.

Consciousness evolves from existing at all
and a galaxy explodes in the mind
Universal opposites and molecular measurements
Produce categories to remind my natural world
Forgetting geometry to find the divine place
Had the snake kept quiet
The apple wouldn’t exist to displace
The snake slivers into loops around a tree
Had it not been known, it didn’t need to be seen,
And would not have been.

The branches divides, watching peoples lives
As Chances divide guiding our fractals
DNA divides, growing like cancer
DNA in chaos is innocence’s answer
Now I accept that thought is not free
Freedom and chaos, grow like a tree.
Evolving from what it used to be

 

[doofqueen]

That is some of the most magnificant piece of writing I have ever read. The flow in the first half of the poem is magnetic and perfect. Visionary and meaning behind it all was out of this world mate. Well done! What was your inspiration for this one?

 

[Baker]

That was a very big compliment.

My inspiration for this poem came from my philosophical understandings such as determinism, Descartes and some of my own psychadelic theory combined with a DMT/weed combo.
If this piece was to be religious it would probably be predominantly buddhist, though it fits taoism too,

and I accept that all religions are possible truths. It's all divided by individual nitpickings or bias. I believe all religions are the same, all targeting the same thing, but nitpicking.

If you watch the news on all different channels, you usually have a closer understanding of the truth behind propoganda.
If you try and understand all different religions and keep your mind open to accept what you truly believe in.

But then what can you believe in, if the universe is made up only around everything we believe or understand. For example, if you or I didn't believe the universe existed... then it wouldn't.


I think I tried to pack too many ideas into this poem, but the underlying message is that DNA is the key to the universe, in terms of chaos vs simplicity, in terms of reality unwinding, in terms of infinite possibilities of universe sitting inside our DNA and infite space sitting beyond it.

I'm ranting, wish i'd replied to this thread on friday, rather then waiting till monday, i'm a bit groggy... hope I made sense

 

[Helios.]

That is a good poem for the most part. LSD damages DNA. UGA is a stop codon. Alice is a loser, not unlike Leah Betts. Nothing lasts forever; all things are possible through God.

 

[Sammy_]

I thought i might leave you a little something. Your poems are developing quite nicely, and the feeling is to me that its becoming an artwork. Its almost like you take us on a journey and then reward us in the last stanza, and more specifically, the last two lines.

The thing is tho, i feel like you've given us your perspective/opinion and thrust upon us the answer, but im not sure of what the question was, if any.

This my friend is a marvellous thing to have the audience feeling/thinking. Artwork, of any kind, beckons our thoughts to be transported, altered and inspired. Your on this path.

Thankyou

 

[(Wordy)]

Had the snake kept quiet
The apple wouldn’t exist to displace
The snake slivers into loops around a tree

To me this sums up the "lusting" for knowledge pretty well, symbolically. Not to mention the "knowledging for lust"!

 

[New]

Wow. Just...fuckin' amazing. It summed up everything in itself. I especially enjoyed this last bit.

DNA divides, growing like cancer
DNA in chaos is innocence’s answer
Now I accept that thought is not free
Freedom and chaos, grow like a tree.

It exudes acceptance as victory, on so many levels.