Divorce

[TheDeceased]

crimson red
she said,
voice heavy like lead
and
instead of confusing the situation
came an insant infatuation
of everything in her head
then
riddles and rhymes
like nickles and dimes
spilled onto the bed
bewildered and blind
never again!
the clone in me joining the dead
as hope is reborn
goodbye to forlorn
and
hello
to the angel in red

never
before then
and never again
would love be understood
she was juliet
and i was romeo
we were marion
and robin hood
the lights in her eyes didn't lie to me
even if somehow they could
the drugs hadn't influenced things
she wore a brilliant white robe
and had shiny wings
...
i found myself losing time
memories lost in rhymes
and focused my gaze back on the game
(compliments to divert the blame)
crimson red
she said,
and
i thought i remembered
that sentence dismembered
sometime before, in my head
then
riddles and rhymes
like badly construed lies
jabbing at me in bed
bewildered and blind is
something I find
emerging from the sea bed
...
losing time while
memories rhyme
compliments
diverting the blame
and back to the game
crimson red
then
spittle
and slime
like nickles and dimes
spilling out onto the bed

bewildered and blind
never open your eyes
until they're forced
when you're dead

 

[lostNfound]

Most fow I've seen in anything I've read in quite sometime.
Not only did it just flow, the substance of the message carried right through and never waned.
It hit home true to the title, well done :D