diamonds when you cry

[tubgirl.jpg]

and so you whip
with those lashes
eyes that wander
from dusk to dawn
and so that feeling
like lovers passes
watch us waltz
lead by swans
and so that thing
you call affection
eyes that panic
like sinking ships
and so fear reigns
with each rejection
as love dries
on sanguine lips

 

[cduggles]

and so that feeling
like lovers passes

and so fear reigns
with each rejection
as love dries
on sanguine lips

Favorite lines.
One of my favorite pieces by you.

 

[tubgirl.jpg]

Favorite lines.
One of my favorite pieces by you.

Thank you @cduggles

 

[summertropicz36]

Sounds pretty good. I never really understood much about poetry and couldn't explain a full paragraph on it, but I've done some poetry myself. I also write music.

 

[tubgirl.jpg]

Sounds pretty good. I never really understood much about poetry and couldn't explain a full paragraph on it, but I've done some poetry myself. I also write music.

Thank you @summertropicz36

 

[summertropicz36]

I will try some poetry tonight. I'm really feeling myself tonight. I feel I could come up with some good stuff. Maybe I will come back and see what ya'll think if I like what I come up with. I usually like what I make, but I tend to get odd comments because they don't exactly understand where I'm coming from.