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Destination

Zennie

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It's ever constantly churning little feet carry me through little glimpses, blurred thoughts and visions.
beginnings, beginnings, beginnings.
Death and life lived in solitude across the street, silently wishing good morning on the contended neighbor.
Limbs and fingers reach down, carressing and shadowing the metal carcas below.
Little churning feet pull me through and past. Playful tongues lap at the traveller, sailing to and from his destiny.
Pull me forth, sparks of light forcing me forward. Leave, but begin again, circular, linear, but always a beginning.
Licks of color descending down. Each its own, yet lovingly entangle into each other. Darkness. No.
Just a beginning.
It falters. I respond, get up and out and into the beginning.
[This message has been edited by Zennie (edited 28 November 2000).]
[This message has been edited by Zennie (edited 28 November 2000).]
 
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this is carrys a very sad tone.. but the imagery is awesome.. its like love/hate thing goin' on.. :/
::mucho hugs:: feel betta muah!
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"If one advances confidently in the direction of his dreams, and endeavors to live the life which he has imagined, he will meet with a success unexpected in common hours."
- Henry David Thoreau
 
Zennie!!!!! Sweetheart, I seriously love this one. You're extremely passionate and your imagery is UNIQUE and extremely interesting. I specially adore hopeful poems, and the ability for one to take the darkest and most anguish filled emotions and turn them into a fantastic attitude, if not always the happiest one initially.
I love you girl.
-Amina
 
Zennie you are such a talented one I enjoy reading all of your work.
I know sometimes life is so overwhelming and we are lost in the sea of which we call life.
but expressing it with such passion as you do is beautiful.
love ya
~Mom~
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Just takes one angel to change a life
~~~~CHERUB~~~~
Aka: Mommyhen
~I still belive in your eyes~-Gigi D'Agostino
 
sometimes things aren't necessarily sad, or hopeful, they just are...this is kind of the way i see this one...
thank you for your comments girls
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