~desire and cravings~

[neverwas]

hurt me like ive never hurt before.
cut my skin and
make me bleed.

i want to live more.

feel my pain.
feed off me.
drink whats mine.
make me bleed.

i want to live more.

my thirst needs to be quenched.
my blood wants to be drawn.
trace a pattern with ur fingers,
and hurt me like ive never hurt before.

darkness is our blanket
as we move
and two becomes one.

my body dances.
once again entwined.
make me move with you.

i want to live more.

fullfill my hunger
and tear away my clothes.
hurt me and make me bleed.

i want to live more...

 

[Funkshun Productions]

Very thought out.. Well written you have a true gift sweetie.

 

[Rollingrrl]

its amazing! the word choice is perfect and your flow cannot be messed with. I mean as I read it, I see the scenes playing through my head, brought to life by your words. it wonderful! you're excellent honey!

~Shelly~

 

[neverwas]

thanx

 

[katmeow]

You're writing some impressive stuff of late girl!!

Nice imagery... I really like the format of this one.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

^^I agree. Some really really sexy stuff coming out here. Something vampire-ish about this that makes it so erotic.

Lemme know if u need a bite!

 

[neverwas]

^^I agree. Some really really sexy stuff coming out here. Something vampire-ish about this that makes it so erotic.

Lemme know if u need a bite!

the vampire-ish was intended

my writtings lately are all individual characters in osmething im writting.

 

[Dastrix Slogan]

^^^and when do *we* get to read this masterpiece?

 

[neverwas]

^^^^ when its finished

 

[up all night]

You really are writing some awesome work lately!

 

[neverwas]

^^^ thanx hun.