Derailed

[Tarsarlan]

Scattered thoughts
race through my head.
Tracks diffused
by words i've read.
Trains of thought
on unnatural rails.
Outside influence
to tip the scales.
Concentration,
an endeavour too hard.
Cogitations
I jealously guard.
The product of
a over-active mind.
Or moulded by,
chemicals designed?
Objectively viewed
it may seem trite.
But go insane
I think I might...
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I really don't know where the hell that came from, my brain does some weird things sometimes... And even though the poem states chemical influence, I was completely straight (and had been for weeks) at the time of writing...

 

[plazma]

Very very good work. I like this one better than most.
I can also relate to the subject very very closely. There's been a lot of times when I've sat down and wondered. "Am I insane?"
-plaz out-

 

[*queensmack*]

...me crazy?...NEVER!!! ...all though i sometimes wonder if i am...
great work Tars
*queensmack*

 

[shittykitty]

i like this alot...it flowed beautifully...i wish i could achieve that in my writings

 

[Noodle]

...nice. Sometimes the work just flows out.
I'm glad you shared this here.
-cheers

 

[cherub]

I for one, liked this alot too,, i haven't seen you write in a bit,, could just be me,, but i liked it alot and glad you shared it