deprived

[BloSs0m]

sleep.
even as a child
i suffered
long sleepless nights.
My eyelids might lock
away the sounds of
reality.
Yet still i am plagued
with disturbing
frightening
terrifying
dreams.
Echoes of conciousness.
But scarier
than falling
into a never ending void
of unconciousness.
As i fall
my muscles sieze
and i wake
to a darker place
littered with truth.
Built on lies.

 

[RareForm]

flows nicely....good poem...

 

[-|Twiztd|-]

Really liked this poem: A+!

 

[katmeow]

Perfect description

Very nice work!!

 

[neverwas]

As i fall
my muscles sieze
and i wake
to a darker place
littered with truth.
Built on lies.

i suffer from sleepless nights to and ur peice really cut close to home for me.

ncie to see uve strolled into this part of the board hun. ur writtings innocent and truthfull.