Depression

[raverchik]

Put away your freedom and your emotions down,
You don’t need them here.


Settling in under this sticky grey cloud, breathtaking.
Taking.my.breath.away, day after day, month to month.


Safe in here, no expectations then no regrets
If you can’t seek, surely you can’t find
Everything is safer in corridors of this head
Nothing comes alive if you don’t let it. Never let it.


Monotone whisperings, upholding this disguise
Turning around, realising this is it, the worst by far.
Nothing gets worse, nothing gets better
How did you get here
Walking across sand only to rest on thorns.


Under this grey haze, stuck until when.
Do not disturb me, For I am sleeping until it feels like home again.

 

[realm]

I felt just like this today. Some good, stinging lines in there that really resonated deeply for a minute. I like the simple format, it's easy to follow and you get your point across nicely.

 

[up all night]

Do not disturb me, For I am sleeping until it feels like home again.

The last line was powerful. I hope you're okay, babe. I'll see you at Hollywood. Just like old times, perhaps.

 

[Golden]

I liked it, it has deep emotions in it. The atmosphere around it all.. Well done!

 

[lil angel15]

Great work!

I really liked it

 

[Jabberwocky]

i enjoy the dichotomy the want to express and feel these things yet the urging to not do this. The preordained knowledge of want vs the experience of an outcome. Thanks for sharing.