depression and heartbreak -not necessarily in that order:-)

[lucky_charms]

Ok first off I'm not a writer AT ALL, I avoid doing it whenever I can, but these 4 poems came to me one day, and I'd like to share them with you all.
1.
My Existance is fading
falling
turning
exploding
Into a thousand tiny fragments
That will be
too difficult
too time consuming
too complex
To ever put back together
2.
Empty
is the feeling in my heart
Unloved
is the feeling in my mind
Never reaching the goal
of a true love that will
Stay...
Erasing permanently
the loneliness within me
3.
How did it get this far?
How could I ever have let myself
fall
into
The dark abyss of hell
that is my life?
Climbing upwards towards bliss
would seem easy
to most
But I am not most
4.
Why must you invade my heart
Coagulate my thoughts
Torture my soul
with things that will never be real?
Leave me be.

 

[runawaygrrrl]

 

[harraser]

I liked the third one best and the last line of the fourth..."leave me be"

 

[Lucky Charmz]

It seems that I can relate more and more to the things you wrote!
Doesnt it suck!

 

[lucky_charms]

hehe nice name lucky charmz