Death

[LadyWidow]

I wake up crying on a cold concrete floor
My head hurting
I feel so give out
I feel something in my hand
I look to find,
A bloody knife
I drop it beside me where I still lay
My hands shake as I try to get up
Wandering where I am
Then I see her
Laying there lifeless
I remember now
She’s dead…
A grin covers my face
I look at how much better she looks dead
The blood all over the ground
She should not have gotten in my way
She knew I had a temper that could … kill
I stand over her and peer into the face of my enemy
If she could see this now…hehe
Most would say, “well at least she is in a better place”
Yea right!
If only they knew her like I knew her she will not be very
Happy for eternity
Because her happy ass is going to hell
And when I get there one day I’ll laugh in her face!

 

[RareForm]

this is twisted girl, but i really enjoyed this piece from you...you never disappoint me with your writing...

Fantastic!

 

[cherub]

twisted is a good work,, and the writting was definately captavating.

 

[neverwas]

excellent yet again. i could marry you through your writting

i like people who arent afraid to write like you do.

 

[BrightEyesIsMe]

I really like this one also. Do you always share your dark side? Or is this just for poetry?