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Dear Father (will you come tonight)

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AmmutTheDevourer

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Tears of salty seas ran from her cheek
Angels were silent and devils did not speak
Hunted she is in this game of the fox
Angry and terrified as she waited for that knock
Cornered and helpless entraped by fright
The shawdow came on to her like wolf in the night
Sin whispered in her ear and ran through her hair
Vulnerable and naked she now cried in dispair
The fight now over for he had surely won
His hands violating her skin till he was done
She no longer fought for she knew her fate to be
Her heart lay broken her soul already did flee
Penetrated by this unspoken sin
Why she did wonder why she was his kin
The smell of his pleasure now heavy in the air
A kiss before his leaving he did try to share
Turning away she sat and lay, for later that day her blood will once again lay.
Confused and enraged but still much of fear
For her fathers departure this night shed not a single tear...
 
It's rare that i read something that leaves me beyond words, but this is one such occassion where words cannot express what your poem has done for me. You seem to tell it as you see it, and it seems to me as though you truely know how it feels.
My thoughts are with you - this is a brilliant piece. No one should suffer like this... no one should ever have to go through this alone. Even though you do not know me, if you need someone to talk to, email me and i'll be there... i know how it feels to be alone with something like this...
*Hugs* :)
 
probably the best style of writing i've seen on this site, that's all i'll say about it.
[ 15 August 2002: Message edited by: Meatpuppet ]
 
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