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[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

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Icicles hang
In a wakened sleep
Poised high above my head

Threatening to spill
And drop their loads
To pierce my waiting insides.

 

[froggygirl]

short, good words.. I like it.. it needs to be read by more people..

 

[ButrosButros_Grantos]

^^^Okay... This made me think, because it was short and gave me the luxury to do so. I'm not sure if you realised it, but it's very clever, so know you do.

 

[doofqueen]

i liked it It's like i was waiting for something to happen but it didn't but i know something was going to soon. It was an anticipation poem.

 

[RareForm]

damn, very nice....

I don't think i've ever seen such a short, perfect poem...

thank you!

 

[cherub]

Great wording on this piece, short and sweet but very thought provoking!