~dancing the day away~

[neverwas]

this is a bit chaotic in the way its written...but its suppose to be that way.cause thats how my work is.

daisies and dandelions
dancers and short skirts.
topless bar maids and smoke filled areas,
i know you love your titties and beer.
butter faces mixed with plastic surgery
she must be mid 20's?
try nearlly 40!

breasts bounce round everywhere
as i make love to the fridge.
dancing in my own little world
you'd be better on the stage than her.
perky nipples and race track pussies,
lead to un-chartered territory
girls in tops leave more to the mystery.

your breasts beat hers hands down.
how much to take a closer look?
chaos and football
theme songs galore.
beer and breasts
bring on some more!

in love with my job
so long have this i longed for.
bourbon and tits
beer and tits
in here it is titties galore!

 

[rewiiired]

Actually, I think it flowed rather well. You did a good job of painting a picture, I like the italicized parts were you talk to yourself, and you make me consider a job change...

 

[neverwas]

thanx hun i was nearlly asleep when i wrote it lol.