Daily Rituals

[up all night]

good morning one night stand
I can see you're bored of the endless
black
then white
sub-realities of indecent exposure.
Skin on skin as ice cold hearts melt in time
to nature's clock of indifferent survival.
I don't know you and you don't care and I don't want this any more.

good afternoon random work colleague
how is work/ uni/ life/ illness/ addiction/ family going?
Lets steal half a cigarette in our lunch break
while we spit out questions with answers we don't listen to
in the shady haze of another wasted day.
I don't know you and you don't care and I don't want this any more.

good evening night time loneliness
Silver screen stories unfold before a TV dinner and a cold handshake
Guns ---> violence ---> death
Love ---> sex ---> pregnancy
Has anyone noticed all these stories end the same way
With the only difference being
Location.
Another useless night of TV [melo]drama.
I don't know you and you don't care and I don't want this any more.

good night [to you]
I tried to tell you things today
Things I never wanted to say
But I'm so lonely
And you're so horny
And in the end that's what gets us through.
I don't know you and you don't care and I don't want this any more

 

[DG]

I really liked this...it hit close to home

 

[harraser]

...indifferent survival

...while we spit out questions with answers we don't listen to

...Has anyone noticed all these stories end the same way
With the only difference being
Location

...But I'm so lonely
And you're so horny
And in the end that's what gets us through

these stood out to me in a more painfully sickly way than i can explain. the first three because to me lately these observations seem to be life. like thats how it is and thats how we should accept it.. i used to fight harder than this...

and the last because ive been a party to such far too many times and it saddens me.. is this why im not fighting so hard anymore? its more comfortable to settle?

i dont know what to say hun, but i loved this, in the way that you love a song that makes you cry with frustration. and i love you. i wish we werent so far away and could talk more often.

 

[neverwas]

good evening night time loneliness

sometimes our best writting comes from what hurts the most.

 

[punch e punch]

supoib!

 

[katmeow]

good afternoon random work colleague
how is work/ uni/ life/ illness/ addiction/ family going?
Lets steal half a cigarette in our lunch break
while we spit out questions with answers we don't listen to
in the shady haze of another wasted day.
I don't know you and you don't care and I don't want this any more.

Your observations of life are so astute ... I've said it before, but I'll say it again, I so enjoy reading what you write!

 

[E-girl]

probably my favorite thing that i've read this week....

everything you write, gets filed in my head under "spectacular".

 

[Taliana]

Oh my gosh honey i can relate so fucking much to this piece it makes me sad. You are beautiful, you have a soul, the fact that you can see through all the patheticness some relationships are, show that you have something to give but arent surrounding yourself with those that can give you what you need and deserve. I loved the structure of this piece, and the constant theme.

*hugs* Hope to see you friday!!!

 

[up all night]

^ Yeah I really hope you come!

Thanks for all the comments everyone. They made my night.

 

[CHiLD-0F-THE-BEAT]

Originally posted by up all night
good afternoon random work colleague
how is work/ uni/ life/ illness/ addiction/ family going?
Lets steal half a cigarette in our lunch break
while we spit out questions with answers we don't listen to
in the shady haze of another wasted day.
I don't know you and you don't care and I don't want this any more.

^This bites and tears me in ways already described.
Brutal.
Honest.
Breath taking.
Just so intense, I can hardly explain...made my chest hurt and my eyes sting.

And amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing piece.
Probably the best thing I have read in a long time, by anyone.

 

[punktuality]

*claps*

 

[cherub]

amazing mind you have there girl.

you put some words in my head that have been in my mind sitting there , you expressed them so elquently.

 

[*sunflower*]

I can relate to this piece in so many ways ... You have a gift.

 

[neverwas]

You have a gift.

summed it up perfectly.

 

[Siany]

Another wonderful piece.. I love every piece i've ever read of yours.

 

[onetwothreefour]

more people need to read this.

 

[raverchik]

beautiful Babe

 

[iLoveYouWithaKnife]

I can see you're bored of the endless
black
then white
sub-realities of indecent exposure.
Skin on skin as ice cold hearts melt in time
to nature's clock of indifferent survival.
I don't know you and you don't care and I don't want this any more.

you have an excellent way with words.

 

[onetwothreefour]

Originally posted by E-girl
everything you write, gets filed in my head under "spectacular".

yep, that's it.

 

[NickyJ]

Fucking awesome UAN! Once again, even tho I'm not supposed to, I admire you! :D